✏️ IELTS Writing Task 2

It is a natural process that animal species such as dinosaurs become extinct. There is no reason for people to prevent this from happening.

📌 Idp 📝 226 words ⭐ Band 8 Model Answer 📅 30 Apr 2026
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Band 8
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226 words
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30 Apr 2026
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Task 2 Essay
📄 Band 8 Model Answer Band 8 · 226 words

Some people believe that animal extinction is a natural process and that humans should not attempt to prevent it. Others argue that people have a responsibility to protect endangered species. This essay will discuss both views before explaining why I disagree with the contention that extinction should simply be accepted.

On the one hand, extinction has occurred throughout Earth’s history without human involvement. Dinosaurs, for example, disappeared due to natural catastrophes such as asteroids and extreme climate change. Similarly, many ancient species failed to survive ice ages or volcanic eruptions because they could not adapt quickly enough. From this perspective, extinction can be seen as a normal part of evolution, allowing stronger or more adaptable species to replace weaker ones

On the other hand, most animal extinctions today are closely linked to human activities rather than natural forces. Species such as elephants and rhinos are endangered mainly because of poaching, while animals like orangutans are losing their habitats due to deforestation for agriculture and housing. For instance, large areas of rainforest are cleared each year to produce palm oil, directly destroying ecosystems that took thousands of years to develop.

In my opinion, because humans are the primary cause of modern extinctions, they also have a moral and practical responsibility to protect biodiversity. Allowing human-driven species loss to continue unchecked would be both irresponsible and dangerous

🎯 Examiner's Analysis
Task Response
Addresses all parts of the task with a clear position throughout
Coherence & Cohesion
Well-organised with clear paragraphing and logical progression
Lexical Resource
Wide range of vocabulary used accurately with only minor errors
Grammatical Range
Variety of complex structures used with good accuracy throughout
💡 Writing Task 2 Tips
Write at least 250 words — aim for 260–280 for safety
Spend 5 minutes planning your structure before writing
Include an introduction, 2 body paragraphs and a conclusion
Use a range of vocabulary — avoid repeating the same words
Check your grammar and spelling in the final 2–3 minutes
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